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Wednesday, June 29, 2011

History and Title

Edited story, with Shin's help in his tips, from M3T for revising it and finally with Everton's help in making a better summary for it. And I thank M3T again for the title design.

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The Bloody Past
In a small region, there were two kingdoms, one called Baltia and the other called Dalsis. The kingdom of Dalsis was a place where there were no rights, with a monstrously cruel king, and the kingdom leaned more towards militarism. Young children from families were often captured by the kingdom's soldiers to be trained into formidable warriors.

This was always the way until one day the kingdom of Baltia decided to declare war on Dalsis for their atrocities. However, Baltia was not very powerful in terms of weaponry. This war dragged on for years, filled with bloody battles and no prisoners taken. Then, one day, the kingdom of Dalsis stumbled upon a book in a cave filled with traps and monsters. After retrieving the book with difficulty, they tried to decipher its contents. It took them a long time to learn a poisoning spell from it. With this spell, they poisoned many people in Baltia, and few survived to defend the kingdom; almost all perished.


After Dalsis's victory, the king desired the book for himself to become a powerful ruler. However, someone betrayed and murdered him. It didn't take long for everyone to discover who the traitor was. The traitor fled with the book, and though many claimed the traitor was killed, or that they fled leaving the book behind, nobody knows for sure. With no king or prince, the kingdom fell into chaos. Many who feared the kingdom heard rumors that it had been destroyed, but nobody ever found it.

100 Years Later
One day, in the peaceful southern city of Bresma, Luzifer, a place free from evils like theft and murder, an unknown life form arrived in a meteor, frightening the people. As it broke apart, a strong reddish light emanated from it, revealing a monstrous creature covered in inscriptions on its thick skin, resembling armor. News spread quickly that this creature destroyed everything in its path, reaching the Central, a stronghold of utmost protection situated in the center of Bresma.

With the power of his special soldiers, the Emperor pursued the creature, which challenged the loyalty of his soldiers and terrorized his people. As defeating it seemed impossible, the Emperor and a trusted soldier attempted the risky task of subduing it. Initially, the monster seemed to have fallen into the ambush, but it surprised the Emperor by eliminating the entire army and part of the castle, leaving only a damaged magical circle behind.

The incident was reported to nearly all neighboring kingdoms, and researchers from the Ifri kingdom came to investigate, reaching the curious conclusion that it was the ancient Iddipou.


Shortly afterward, the monster disappeared, giving the population no more than two years of peace. However, this time, King Garret of Dalaan was already assembling an army capable of facing it. Among this army, Luke, a boy who lost his parents during the monster's first appearance, intends to join and seek revenge. On his journey, Luke meets Lucy, a girl who insists on accompanying him, out of gratitude for his previous help. Little do they both know what awaits them until their encounter with King Garret and, consequently, the final battle against the feared Iddipou!

The Bearer
Mysteriously, someone discovers about the book, which had become a legend long after the two kingdoms fought each other. Oscar is a former member of a special group from the Baltia kingdom. He hears rumors about it after the meteor's fall and the monster's appearance. Oscar decides to investigate on his own to see if there's a possibility someone is using the book. He learns from a stranger that someone knows where the book is, and Oscar must go to the kingdom of Maki to find this person.

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